A few things noted:
have some bright yellow lines that mimic the website lines?
line weights are thick when it is too big
colors are dust and organic, need bold synthetic colors, change the bg to black
outline her name and see what i looks like, magentaaaaa?
maybe try wrapping the text like the top building image?
title messed up, fix it
bottom building drop a bit more
Time to get to work!
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